Loki and Laufey scene (original script)

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Loki, looking apprehensive, walks alone across the surface of the planet. Darkness shrouds the ruined temple, save for the shafts of light which knife their way in through the damaged ceiling. Loki enters. Frost Giant guards surround him on all sides. Laufey approaches, towers over him menacingly.
Laufey: Tell me why I shouldn't kill you.
Loki: I've come alone and unarmed.
Laufey: To what end?
Loki: To make you another proposition.
Laufey: (REALIZING) So you're the one who let us into Asgard.
Loki: You're welcome.
Laufey: My men are dead, and I have no Casket. You are a deceiver.
Laufey lashes out, grabs Loki around the throat, but Loki calmly stands his ground.
Loki: You have no idea what I am.
The blueness spreads across his face, as Laufey and the guards stare in shock. Loki grins.
Loki: (CONT'D) Hello, Father.
Laufey releases him. Loki's body turns back to normal.
Intrigued, Laufey sizes up his son.
Laufey: Ah, the bastard son. I thought Odin had killed you. That's what I would have done. He's as weak as you are.
Loki: No longer weak. I now rule Asgard, until Odin awakens. Perhaps you should not have so carelessly abandoned me.
This gives Laufey pause.
Laufey: Or perhaps it was the wisest choice I've ever made. I will hear you.
Loki: I will conceal you and a handful of your soldiers, lead you into his chambers, and let you slay him where he lies. I'll keep the throne, and you will have the Casket.
Laufey studies Loki's face.
Laufey: Why would you do this?
Loki: When all is done, we will have a permanent peace between our two worlds. Then I, the bastard son, will have accomplished what Odin and Thor never could.
Laufey: This is a great day for Jotunheim. Asgard is finally ours.
Loki: No. Asgard is mine. The rest of the Nine Realms will be yours, if you do as you're told.
Laufey considers the proposition.
Laufey: I accept.
Loki turns to leave. As he goes, the slightest trace of a smile crosses his face.


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Can we take a moment and appreciate the awesomness of this dialogue! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS DIDN'T MAKE IT TO THE FINAL CUT! OMG THIS WOULD BE LIKE THE MOST AWESOME TALK EVER ON THAT MOVIE!
LOOK AT HOW PROUD LAUFEY IS! HE IS SO PROUD LIKE OMG! Dammit Laufey I will never believe you abandoned loki, not with that bed-ish looking thing on the temple, If you'd abandon a kid you would've just placed him there right? WELL THERE WAS A BED THERE (as what I recall) THAT GIVES EFFORT AND OBVIOUS CARE!
back again, ah when he found out that loki was his son he didn't lash out or anything but the first thing that went out of his mouth was Odin, yes he thought of Odin first because I bet it inside it crushed him to find out his son growing up with his enemy BUT HE WAS STILL PROUD THAT HIS SON MADE IT, YOU COULD JUST FEEL THAT PROUD SMIRK/SMILE OVER THERE THAT IS TWITCHING TO COME OUT! but of coarse being a 'jotun' he has got to cover his way of telling how immensely happy and proud he was to see him by cutting remark such as that above!  
But what really made me love this dialogue was this
Loki: No longer weak. I now rule Asgard, until Odin awakens. Perhaps you should not have so carelessly abandoned me.
This gives Laufey pause.

Laufey: Or perhaps it was the wisest choice I've ever made. I will hear you.

Oh gawd Loki feels, he said it so nonchalant so detach but you could hear and taste that bitterness there! I just really want to hug him here, I wonder what Laufey feels or thinks at that exact moment, I think he would've noticed Loki's tone there. Cause he right away changed the topic and didn't linger to that unspoken question..You know if this was not really centered around action or superheroes but DRAMA, then I think I would've heard a sad song playing on the background now and silence as the audience weep at this scene (well I would).
I could give you a better analysis but I"m tired and its early morning plus I have 2 exams 5 hours from now which I haven't studied yet -.-) EXPECT ME TO DRAW MORE OF THESE TWO CAUSE I LOVE FEELS AND I THINK ITS IN THEIR BLOOD TO GET FEELS OUT OF US FANGIRLS. okay over and out!
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OMG why?? Why did Loki get so screwed in this movie scene wise?? I mean all the deleted scenes with these really emotional and important parts about his character they get taken out and now this!! I always wondered when I watched this part in "Thor" like why Loki didn't say anything, when I first watched it I was like .."What? No father son chat?" haha! Pff I guess they didn't realize how popular Loki would be when Thor came out, hopefully them knowing how popular he is now will keep them from cutting stuff like this. Thank the lord for people like you who post this stuff for us Loki fans though, its always nice to see this stuff to understand Loki more. Thank you. :3